Minggu, 07 Oktober 2012

Assignment 3: Narrative Story of Song Lyric

First i will  give you this song , let sing together :)

Puff , The Magic Dragon
(Chorus)
Puff, the magic dragon lived by the sea
And frolicked in the autumn mist in a land called Honah Lee

Little Jackie Paper loved that rascal Puff,
and brought him strings and sealing wax and other fancy stuff. Oh!

(Chorus, twice)

Together they would travel on a boat with billowed sail
Jackie kept a lookout perched on Puff's gigantic tail,
Noble kings and princes would bow whenever they came,
Pirate ships would lower their flag when Puff roared out his name. Oh!

(Chorus)

A dragon lives forever but not so little boys
Painted wings and giant rings make way for other toys.
One grey night it happened, Jackie Paper came no more
And Puff that mighty dragon, he ceased his fearless roar.

His head was bent in sorrow, green scales fell like rain,
Puff no longer went to play along the cherry lane.
Without his life-long friend, Puff could not be brave,
So Puff that mighty dragon sadly slipped into his cave. Oh


changes into narrative story :

Puff , The Magic Dragon

      One upon a time there lived a magic dragon named Puff. He lived in the deep sea and he always frolicked in the autumn mist in the Honah Lee.
      
      One day there was a male he was Little Jackie Paper. He loved that rascal Puff very much and brought The Magic Dragon strings and sealing wax and other fancy stuff. Together they sailed with billowed wave, but they still confidence. Jackie was standing proudly at the Puff's gigantic tail. Then whenever they passed in front of noble kings and princess , they always respected with that mighty sailor. As well as the pirates who saw them sail.

      Puff would live forever but so not with little Jackie Paper. Maybe that's what made ​​the magic dragon was not as strong as usual. Puff always glum because he can't sailed with Jackie forever. Without Jackie , Puff was nothing so that magic dragon decided to back in his cave.

Jumat, 05 Oktober 2012

Assignment 2 : Narrative text

Content :

·     defininition (Social function/ Communicative Purpose)

       To amuse, entertain and to deal with actual or vicarious experience in different ways.


   Generic (Schematic) Structure
Orientation
set the scene and introduces the participants
menceritakan tempat kejadian, waktu, suasana, dan tokoh-tokohnya

Evaluation
a stepping back to evaluate the plight
mengevaluasi keadaan

Complication
a crisis arises
muncul krisis

Resolution
the crisis is resolved, for better or for worse
krisis teratasi, dengan lebih baik atau lebih buruk

Re-orientation
closure (optional)

                                                                                                                                                                       


     Language features and example

      Description of characters and places using:
      -     Adjectives (to describe nouns)
       Example :  heavy, frosty, transparent, grumpy
-      Adverbs  (to describe verbs)
       Example : quickly, secretly, quietly, energetically, suddenly
-      Similes  (to compare one thing with another)
       Example : like or as, as bright, as the moon, the kiss felt like a butterfly’s wings against
                         her cheek                                                                        
-      Time words
       Example : Once upon a time, long ago, then, last week
-      Verbs indicating actions in the story
       Example :  hid, ate, ran, whispered, looked

        Example text (story, fable, legend etc)
 
          ------>   Legend
 
The Story of Sangkuriang and Tangkuban Perahu Mountain

Once, there was a kingdom in Priangan Land. Lived a happy family. They were a father in form of dog,his name is Tumang, a mother which was called is Dayang Sumbi, and a child which was called Sangkuriang.
One day, Dayang Sumbi asked her son to go hunting with his lovely dog, Tumang. After hunting all day, Sangkuriang began desperate and worried because he hunted no deer. Then he thought to shot his own dog. Then he took the dog liver and carried home.

Soon Dayang Sumbi found out that it was not deer lever but Tumang's, his own dog. So, She was very angry and hit Sangkuriang's head. In that incident, Sangkuriang got wounded and scar then cast away from their home.

Years go bye, Sangkuriang had travel many places and finally arrived at a village. He met a beautiful woman and felt in love with her. When they were discussing their wedding plans, The woman looked at the wound in Sangkuriang's head. It matched to her son's wound who had left severall years earlier. Soon she realized that she felt in love with her own son.


She couldn't marry him but how to say it. Then, she found the way. She needed a lake and a boat for celebrating their wedding day. Sangkuriang had to make them in one night. He built a lake. With a dawn just moment away and the boat was almost complete. Dayang Sumbi had to stop it. Then, she lit up the eastern horizon with flashes of light. It made the cock crowed for a new day.
Sangkuriang failed to marry her. She was very angry and kicked the boat. It felt over and became the mountain of Tangkuban Perahu Bandung.


--------->   Fable


A Boy and an Apple Tree

One time, there lived a big apple tree and a boy who liked to play around under the apple tree everyday. He was happy to climb up to the top of the tree, eat the fruit, a nap in the shade of the shade leaves. The boy loved the apple tree. Similarly, the apple tree is very love little boy too.

Time flies. The boy had grown big and no longer playing with the apple tree every day. One day he went to the apple tree. His face looked sad.

“Come over here and play with me,” said the apple tree.
“I’m not a little kid playing with the tree again,” replied the boy.
“I want to have toys, but I’m not having money to buy it.”
The tree replied, “Sorry, but I did not have money … but you can take all of my fruit and sell it. You can get the money to buy toys. “

The boy was very happy. He grabbed all the apples on the tree and left happily. However, after that the boy never came back. The tree was sad again.
One day the boy returned again. Tree was so excited.
“Come play with me anymore,” said the apple tree.
“I do not have the time,” replied the boy.
“I have to work for my family. We need a house for shelter. Will you help me? “


“Sorry, but I don’t have a house. But you can cut down all of my branches to build your house”, said the apple tree. Then the boy cut all of the branches and twigs that apple tree and left happily.

The tree was also felt happy to see the boy happy, but the boy never came back again. The tree was lonely and sad again.

One hot summer day, the boy returned again. The tree was delighted.
“Come and play again with me,” the tree said.
 “I’m sad,” said the boy.
“I’m old and want to live in peace. I want to go on vacation and sailing. Will you give me a boat to cruise? “
“Sorry, but I don’t have a boat, but you may cut my trunk and use it to create a ship that you want. Go sailing and have fun. “Later, the boy cut the tree trunk and makes a dream ship.

He then went sailing and never again came to the apple tree.

Finally, the boy returned again after all these years later.
“I’m sorry my son,” said the apple tree.
“I do not have apple for you anymore.”
“It’s okay. I also have no teeth to bite your fruit, “replied the boy.
“I don’t have a trunk and branches you can climb,” said the apple tree.
“Now, I’m too old for that,” replied the boy.
“I really do not have anything more can I give to you. What remains is my roots old and dying, “said the apple tree with tears.
“I do not need anything else right now,” said the boy.
“I just need a place to rest. I was so tired after all these years. “
 “Oooh, very nice. Do you know? The root of old trees is the best place to lie down and rest. Come, lay in the arms of my roots and rest in peace. “
The boy lay in the arms of tree roots. The tree was glad and smiled with tears in his eyes.